October 10, 2013 - Writing a Conclusion

I can write a proficient conclusion

To be able to do this I must use past examples and the teacher model to help construct a concluding paragraph that includes the following:

1. Summary of learning
2. Connections to main ideas
3. Connection to the "big picture" (the world or humanity) What implications does the subjects power have on the world or on many people?

I will show this in my five paragraph essay. 

Mr D's Conclusion Paragraph

McDonalds is the most powerful topic discussed in English 10 because their impact on society is spreading.  If McDonalds keeps growing at the rate it has been over the last fifty years, the world will be in trouble.  They strategically use their power to hook children on their unhealthy foods by using commercials and providing cheap, convenient meals for parents to buy for their families.  As McDonalds puts up more golden arches across the world, people will become more sick and healthcare will rise affecting even the people who do not eat there.  This is why McDonalds is the most powerful.