Tuesday, December 17, 2013

December 17, 2013 - Revising Analysis Essay

I can read and evaluate my essay for proficiency.

To be able to do this I must understand the expectations for this essay.

To demonstrate this I will turn in two essays: a rough draft with edits and a final essay.

Directions:

1.       Finish your first draft response to “Story of an Hour”
a.       Prompt: Discuss how two literary elements help convey the theme of the story.
b.      In “Story of an Hour” Chopin uses __________ and ____________ to convey _____________________________________________________________.
2.       READ YOUR FINISHED DRAFT
3.       As you are reading your draft make sure you’ve included the following:
a.       Thesis statement with two literary elements and clear theme.
b.      2 body paragraphs (One about how each literary elements helped convey the theme)
c.       2 topic sentence at the beginning of each body paragraphs
d.      Logical background information that helps to set up your textual evidence
e.      2 or more examples of textual evidence that help prove part of your thesis
f.        2 Comment #1’s – explain the meaning of the quote and its connection to the lit. element.
g.       2 Comment #2’s – explains the importance of evidence and clearly connects evidence and ideas to thesis statement.

Questions to ask when you are finished:
1.       Is this the best I can do?
2.       Are there any places where I could choose a stronger word?
3.       Did I include everything from the list above?
4.       Would my paper make sense for someone who has never read the story before?
5.       Do my examples of textual evidence truly have the literary element I discussed in them?
6.       Did I connect my analysis to my thesis?
7.       Did I answer so what in my comment 2’s?
8.       Was my writing interesting?

Revise: After you have finished checking your papers for all of the following (above), rewrite your essay with corrections on a separate sheet of paper. You will staple your rough draft to your revised draft and turn it in as your final.


Note: If you do not show any revision and still have multiple mistakes, your grade will be lowered.

Monday, December 16, 2013

December 16, 2013 - Revision of Analysis Essay

I can read and evaluate my essay for proficiency.

To be able to do this I must understand the expectations for this essay.

To demonstrate this I will turn in two essays: a rough draft with edits and a final essay.

Directions:

1.       Finish your first draft response to “Story of an Hour”
a.       Prompt: Discuss how two literary elements help convey the theme of the story.
b.      In “Story of an Hour” Chopin uses __________ and ____________ to convey _____________________________________________________________.
2.       READ YOUR FINISHED DRAFT
3.       As you are reading your draft make sure you’ve included the following:
a.       Thesis statement with two literary elements and clear theme.
b.      2 body paragraphs (One about how each literary elements helped convey the theme)
c.       2 topic sentence at the beginning of each body paragraphs
d.      Logical background information that helps to set up your textual evidence
e.      2 or more examples of textual evidence that help prove part of your thesis
f.        2 Comment #1’s – explain the meaning of the quote and its connection to the lit. element.
g.       2 Comment #2’s – explains the importance of evidence and clearly connects evidence and ideas to thesis statement.

Questions to ask when you are finished:
1.       Is this the best I can do?
2.       Are there any places where I could choose a stronger word?
3.       Did I include everything from the list above?
4.       Would my paper make sense for someone who has never read the story before?
5.       Do my examples of textual evidence truly have the literary element I discussed in them?
6.       Did I connect my analysis to my thesis?
7.       Did I answer so what in my comment 2’s?
8.       Was my writing interesting?

Revise: After you have finished checking your papers for all of the following (above), rewrite your essay with corrections on a separate sheet of paper. You will staple your rough draft to your revised draft and turn it in as your final.


Note: If you do not show any revision and still have multiple mistakes, your grade will be lowered.

December 13, 2013 - Analyzing Literary Elements in "Story of an Hour"

I can read and analyze "Story of an Hour" to identify literary elements and theme.

To be able to do this I must be able to read and get the gist, identify major literary elements, and connect my analysis to the theme.

I will demonstrate this by writing two paragraphs that discuss how two literary elements helped convey the theme of the story.

If you need help check out this website: 

http://classiclit.about.com/od/storyofanhourchopin/a/aa_storyhour_text.htm

Organization:

Thesis: In “Story of an Hour” Chopin uses characterization and symbolism to convey that people often feel trapped by their marriage.

Body Paragraph #1 - Includes everything below

Topic sentence: Chopin uses characterization to show that Mrs. Mallard desires to be free from her marriage.

Background: In the beginning of the story, Mrs. Mallard is heartbroken about her husband’s death.

Textual Evidence: When she finds out that her husband died, “she wept at once, with sudden, wild abandonment, in her sister’s arms.” 

Comment #1: This shows that at first she was really sad about losing her husband, but her feelings quickly changed.

Background: Mrs. Mallard goes to her room to mourn about her husband, but she realizes that she is now free.

Textual evidence: In her room, she says “Free, free, free!”

Comment 1: This shows that she felt trapped by her marriage.


Comment 2: This important because many people probably feel trapped by their marriage because they have to give up some freedom. It must have been boring for Mrs. Mallard, always waking up to the same life with out any opportunities to discover her individuality.

December 12, 2013 - Analysis Writing of "Story of an Hour"

I can read and analyze "Story of an Hour" to identify literary elements and theme.

To be able to do this I must be able to read and get the gist, identify major literary elements, and connect my analysis to the theme.

I will demonstrate this by writing two paragraphs that discuss how two literary elements helped convey the theme of the story.

If you need help check out this website: 

http://classiclit.about.com/od/storyofanhourchopin/a/aa_storyhour_text.htm

Organization:

Thesis: In “Story of an Hour” Chopin uses characterization and symbolism to convey that people often feel trapped by their marriage.

Body Paragraph #1 - Includes everything below

Topic sentence: Chopin uses characterization to show that Mrs. Mallard desires to be free from her marriage.

Background: In the beginning of the story, Mrs. Mallard is heartbroken about her husband’s death.

Textual Evidence: When she finds out that her husband died, “she wept at once, with sudden, wild abandonment, in her sister’s arms.” 

Comment #1: This shows that at first she was really sad about losing her husband, but her feelings quickly changed.

Background: Mrs. Mallard goes to her room to mourn about her husband, but she realizes that she is now free.

Textual evidence: In her room, she says “Free, free, free!”

Comment 1: This shows that she felt trapped by her marriage.


Comment 2: This important because many people probably feel trapped by their marriage because they have to give up some freedom. It must have been boring for Mrs. Mallard, always waking up to the same life with out any opportunities to discover her individuality.

December 11, 2013 - Analyzing Literary Elements in "Story of an Hour"

I can read and analyze "Story of an Hour" to identify literary elements and theme.

To be able to do this I must be able to read and get the gist, identify major literary elements, and connect my analysis to the theme.

I will demonstrate this by annotating "Story of an Hour" with a focus of identifying literary elements and theme.

Look for these Lit. Elements: 

  1. Mood 
  2. Characterization
  3. Figurative Language
    1. Metaphor
    2. Simile 
    3. Personification
  4. Symbolism 
Directions: Read and annotate the story below. Look for the literary elements above and try to identify the theme. 




The Story of an Hour
By: Kate Chopin
Knowing that Mrs. Mallard was afflicted with a heart trouble, great care was taken to break to her as gently as possible the news of her husband's death. It was her sister Josephine who told her, in broken sentences; veiled hints that revealed in half concealing. Her husband's friend Richards was there, too, near her. It was he who had been in the newspaper office when intelligence of the railroad disaster was received, with Brently Mallard's name leading the list of "killed." He had only taken the time to assure himself of its truth by a second telegram, and had hastened to forestall any less careful, less tender friend in bearing the sad message.

She did not hear the story as many women have heard the same, with a paralyzed inability to accept its significance. She wept at once, with sudden, wild abandonment, in her sister's arms. When the storm of grief had spent itself she went away to her room alone. She would have no one follow her.

There stood, facing the open window, a comfortable, roomy armchair. Into this she sank, pressed down by a physical exhaustion that haunted her body and seemed to reach into her soul.

She could see in the open square before her house the tops of trees that were all aquiver with the new spring life. The delicious breath of rain was in the air. In the street below a peddler was crying his wares. The notes of a distant song which some one was singing reached her faintly, and countless sparrows were twittering in the eaves.

There were patches of blue sky showing here and there through the clouds that had met and piled one above the other in the west facing her window.

She sat with her head thrown back upon the cushion of the chair, quite motionless, except when a sob came up into her throat and shook her, as a child who has cried itself to sleep continues to sob in its dreams.

She was young, with a fair, calm face, whose lines bespoke repression and even a certain strength. But now there was a dull stare in her eyes, whose gaze was fixed away off yonder on one of those patches of blue sky. It was not a glance of reflection, but rather indicated a suspension of intelligent thought.

There was something coming to her and she was waiting for it, fearfully. What was it? She did not know; it was too subtle and elusive to name. But she felt it, creeping out of the sky, reaching toward her through the sounds, the scents, the color that filled the air.

Now her bosom rose and fell tumultuously. She was beginning to recognize this thing that was approaching to possess her, and she was striving to beat it back with her will--as powerless as her two white slender hands would have been.

When she abandoned herself a little whispered word escaped her slightly parted lips. She said it over and over under her breath: "free, free, free!" The vacant stare and the look of terror that had followed it went from her eyes. They stayed keen and bright. Her pulses beat fast, and the coursing blood warmed and relaxed every inch of her body.

She did not stop to ask if it were or were not a monstrous joy that held her. A clear and exalted perception enabled her to dismiss the suggestion as trivial.

She knew that she would weep again when she saw the kind, tender hands folded in death; the face that had never looked save with love upon her, fixed and gray and dead. But she saw beyond that bitter moment a long procession of years to come that would belong to her absolutely. And she opened and spread her arms out to them in welcome.

There would be no one to live for during those coming years; she would live for herself. There would be no powerful will bending hers in that blind persistence with which men and women believe they have a right to impose a private will upon a fellow-creature. A kind intention or a cruel intention made the act seem no less a crime as she looked upon it in that brief moment of illumination.

And yet she had loved him--sometimes. Often she had not. What did it matter! What could love, the unsolved mystery, count for in face of this possession of self-assertion which she suddenly recognized as the strongest impulse of her being!

"Free! Body and soul free!" she kept whispering.

Josephine was kneeling before the closed door with her lips to the keyhole, imploring for admission. "Louise, open the door! I beg, open the door--you will make yourself ill. What are you doing Louise? For heaven's sake open the door."

"Go away. I am not making myself ill." No; she was drinking in a very elixir of life through that open window.

Her fancy was running riot along those days ahead of her. Spring days, and summer days, and all sorts of days that would be her own. She breathed a quick prayer that life might be long. It was only yesterday she had thought with a shudder that life might be long.

She arose at length and opened the door to her sister's importunities. There was a feverish triumph in her eyes, and she carried herself unwittingly like a goddess of Victory. She clasped her sister's waist, and together they descended the stairs. Richards stood waiting for them at the bottom.

Some one was opening the front door with a latchkey. It was Brently Mallard who entered, a little travel-stained, composedly carrying his grip-sack and umbrella. He had been far from the scene of accident, and did not even know there had been one. He stood amazed at Josephine's piercing cry; at Richards' quick motion to screen him from the view of his wife.

But Richards was too late.

When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease--of joy that kills.

Tuesday, December 10, 2013

December 10, 2013 - Read and Analyze "Story of an Hour"

I can read and analyze "Story of an Hour" to identify literary elements and theme.

To be able to do this I must be able to read and get the gist, identify major literary elements, and connect my analysis to the theme.

I will demonstrate this by annotating "Story of an Hour" with a focus of identifying literary elements and theme.

Look for these Lit. Elements: 

  1. Mood 
  2. Characterization
  3. Figurative Language
    1. Metaphor
    2. Simile 
    3. Personification
  4. Symbolism 
Directions: Read and annotate the story below. Look for the literary elements above and try to identify the theme. 


The Story of an Hour
By: Kate Chopin
Knowing that Mrs. Mallard was afflicted with a heart trouble, great care was taken to break to her as gently as possible the news of her husband's death. It was her sister Josephine who told her, in broken sentences; veiled hints that revealed in half concealing. Her husband's friend Richards was there, too, near her. It was he who had been in the newspaper office when intelligence of the railroad disaster was received, with Brently Mallard's name leading the list of "killed." He had only taken the time to assure himself of its truth by a second telegram, and had hastened to forestall any less careful, less tender friend in bearing the sad message.

She did not hear the story as many women have heard the same, with a paralyzed inability to accept its significance. She wept at once, with sudden, wild abandonment, in her sister's arms. When the storm of grief had spent itself she went away to her room alone. She would have no one follow her.

There stood, facing the open window, a comfortable, roomy armchair. Into this she sank, pressed down by a physical exhaustion that haunted her body and seemed to reach into her soul.

She could see in the open square before her house the tops of trees that were all aquiver with the new spring life. The delicious breath of rain was in the air. In the street below a peddler was crying his wares. The notes of a distant song which some one was singing reached her faintly, and countless sparrows were twittering in the eaves.

There were patches of blue sky showing here and there through the clouds that had met and piled one above the other in the west facing her window.

She sat with her head thrown back upon the cushion of the chair, quite motionless, except when a sob came up into her throat and shook her, as a child who has cried itself to sleep continues to sob in its dreams.

She was young, with a fair, calm face, whose lines bespoke repression and even a certain strength. But now there was a dull stare in her eyes, whose gaze was fixed away off yonder on one of those patches of blue sky. It was not a glance of reflection, but rather indicated a suspension of intelligent thought.

There was something coming to her and she was waiting for it, fearfully. What was it? She did not know; it was too subtle and elusive to name. But she felt it, creeping out of the sky, reaching toward her through the sounds, the scents, the color that filled the air.

Now her bosom rose and fell tumultuously. She was beginning to recognize this thing that was approaching to possess her, and she was striving to beat it back with her will--as powerless as her two white slender hands would have been.

When she abandoned herself a little whispered word escaped her slightly parted lips. She said it over and over under her breath: "free, free, free!" The vacant stare and the look of terror that had followed it went from her eyes. They stayed keen and bright. Her pulses beat fast, and the coursing blood warmed and relaxed every inch of her body.

She did not stop to ask if it were or were not a monstrous joy that held her. A clear and exalted perception enabled her to dismiss the suggestion as trivial.

She knew that she would weep again when she saw the kind, tender hands folded in death; the face that had never looked save with love upon her, fixed and gray and dead. But she saw beyond that bitter moment a long procession of years to come that would belong to her absolutely. And she opened and spread her arms out to them in welcome.

There would be no one to live for during those coming years; she would live for herself. There would be no powerful will bending hers in that blind persistence with which men and women believe they have a right to impose a private will upon a fellow-creature. A kind intention or a cruel intention made the act seem no less a crime as she looked upon it in that brief moment of illumination.

And yet she had loved him--sometimes. Often she had not. What did it matter! What could love, the unsolved mystery, count for in face of this possession of self-assertion which she suddenly recognized as the strongest impulse of her being!

"Free! Body and soul free!" she kept whispering.

Josephine was kneeling before the closed door with her lips to the keyhole, imploring for admission. "Louise, open the door! I beg, open the door--you will make yourself ill. What are you doing Louise? For heaven's sake open the door."

"Go away. I am not making myself ill." No; she was drinking in a very elixir of life through that open window.

Her fancy was running riot along those days ahead of her. Spring days, and summer days, and all sorts of days that would be her own. She breathed a quick prayer that life might be long. It was only yesterday she had thought with a shudder that life might be long.

She arose at length and opened the door to her sister's importunities. There was a feverish triumph in her eyes, and she carried herself unwittingly like a goddess of Victory. She clasped her sister's waist, and together they descended the stairs. Richards stood waiting for them at the bottom.

Some one was opening the front door with a latchkey. It was Brently Mallard who entered, a little travel-stained, composedly carrying his grip-sack and umbrella. He had been far from the scene of accident, and did not even know there had been one. He stood amazed at Josephine's piercing cry; at Richards' quick motion to screen him from the view of his wife.

But Richards was too late.

When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease--of joy that kills.

December 9, 2013 - Reading and Analyzing "Story of an Hour"

I can read and analyze "Story of an Hour" to identify literary elements and theme.

To be able to do this I must be able to read and get the gist, identify major literary elements, and connect my analysis to the theme.

I will demonstrate this by annotating "Story of an Hour" with a focus of identifying literary elements and theme.

Look for these Lit. Elements: 

  1. Mood 
  2. Characterization
  3. Figurative Language
    1. Metaphor
    2. Simile 
    3. Personification
  4. Symbolism 
Directions: Read and annotate the story below. Look for the literary elements above and try to identify the theme. 




The Story of an Hour
By: Kate Chopin
Knowing that Mrs. Mallard was afflicted with a heart trouble, great care was taken to break to her as gently as possible the news of her husband's death. It was her sister Josephine who told her, in broken sentences; veiled hints that revealed in half concealing. Her husband's friend Richards was there, too, near her. It was he who had been in the newspaper office when intelligence of the railroad disaster was received, with Brently Mallard's name leading the list of "killed." He had only taken the time to assure himself of its truth by a second telegram, and had hastened to forestall any less careful, less tender friend in bearing the sad message.

She did not hear the story as many women have heard the same, with a paralyzed inability to accept its significance. She wept at once, with sudden, wild abandonment, in her sister's arms. When the storm of grief had spent itself she went away to her room alone. She would have no one follow her.

There stood, facing the open window, a comfortable, roomy armchair. Into this she sank, pressed down by a physical exhaustion that haunted her body and seemed to reach into her soul.

She could see in the open square before her house the tops of trees that were all aquiver with the new spring life. The delicious breath of rain was in the air. In the street below a peddler was crying his wares. The notes of a distant song which some one was singing reached her faintly, and countless sparrows were twittering in the eaves.

There were patches of blue sky showing here and there through the clouds that had met and piled one above the other in the west facing her window.

She sat with her head thrown back upon the cushion of the chair, quite motionless, except when a sob came up into her throat and shook her, as a child who has cried itself to sleep continues to sob in its dreams.

She was young, with a fair, calm face, whose lines bespoke repression and even a certain strength. But now there was a dull stare in her eyes, whose gaze was fixed away off yonder on one of those patches of blue sky. It was not a glance of reflection, but rather indicated a suspension of intelligent thought.

There was something coming to her and she was waiting for it, fearfully. What was it? She did not know; it was too subtle and elusive to name. But she felt it, creeping out of the sky, reaching toward her through the sounds, the scents, the color that filled the air.

Now her bosom rose and fell tumultuously. She was beginning to recognize this thing that was approaching to possess her, and she was striving to beat it back with her will--as powerless as her two white slender hands would have been.

When she abandoned herself a little whispered word escaped her slightly parted lips. She said it over and over under her breath: "free, free, free!" The vacant stare and the look of terror that had followed it went from her eyes. They stayed keen and bright. Her pulses beat fast, and the coursing blood warmed and relaxed every inch of her body.

She did not stop to ask if it were or were not a monstrous joy that held her. A clear and exalted perception enabled her to dismiss the suggestion as trivial.

She knew that she would weep again when she saw the kind, tender hands folded in death; the face that had never looked save with love upon her, fixed and gray and dead. But she saw beyond that bitter moment a long procession of years to come that would belong to her absolutely. And she opened and spread her arms out to them in welcome.

There would be no one to live for during those coming years; she would live for herself. There would be no powerful will bending hers in that blind persistence with which men and women believe they have a right to impose a private will upon a fellow-creature. A kind intention or a cruel intention made the act seem no less a crime as she looked upon it in that brief moment of illumination.

And yet she had loved him--sometimes. Often she had not. What did it matter! What could love, the unsolved mystery, count for in face of this possession of self-assertion which she suddenly recognized as the strongest impulse of her being!

"Free! Body and soul free!" she kept whispering.

Josephine was kneeling before the closed door with her lips to the keyhole, imploring for admission. "Louise, open the door! I beg, open the door--you will make yourself ill. What are you doing Louise? For heaven's sake open the door."

"Go away. I am not making myself ill." No; she was drinking in a very elixir of life through that open window.

Her fancy was running riot along those days ahead of her. Spring days, and summer days, and all sorts of days that would be her own. She breathed a quick prayer that life might be long. It was only yesterday she had thought with a shudder that life might be long.

She arose at length and opened the door to her sister's importunities. There was a feverish triumph in her eyes, and she carried herself unwittingly like a goddess of Victory. She clasped her sister's waist, and together they descended the stairs. Richards stood waiting for them at the bottom.

Some one was opening the front door with a latchkey. It was Brently Mallard who entered, a little travel-stained, composedly carrying his grip-sack and umbrella. He had been far from the scene of accident, and did not even know there had been one. He stood amazed at Josephine's piercing cry; at Richards' quick motion to screen him from the view of his wife.

But Richards was too late.

When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease--of joy that kills.

Monday, November 25, 2013

November 25, 2013 - Revision and Editing

I can evaluate and revise an analytical paragraph,

To do this I must be able to understand the connection between thesis and body paragraphs.

I will demonstrate this by revising my analysis of "Hunger" and "The Flowers"

Directions: Look at directions from last week to ensure that you have addressed all requirements. 

Tuesday, November 19, 2013

November 19, 2013 - Analyzing Literature

Directions: See Monday, November 18 directions.  Continue annotating for how imagery, setting, diction, symbolism, and characterization help convey the theme in "The Flowers."  The text can be found yesterday's lesson as well. 

Warm-up  (Extra credit - comment on here): If your life story was turned into a book, what would be the theme? 

Monday, November 18, 2013

November 18, 2013 - Reading to get the Gist of "Flowers"

I can read and analyze "Flowers" to identify the literary elements and the theme.

To do this I must be able to read and get the gist, identify major literary elements, and connect  my analysis to the theme.

To demonstrate this I will write a response that analyzes how a literary element helps convey the theme of a text.

Directions: Read the poem "Strange Fruit" (audio below). Try to find metaphor and analyze the author's word choice (diction). After analyzing "Strange Fruit," read and get the gist of "Flowers" (text below). 


What is so strange about this fruit? Why are they Southern trees?

“Strange Fruit” – Billie Holiday

Southern trees bear strange fruit
Blood on the leaves
Blood at the root
Black bodies swinging in the southern breeze
Strange fruit hanging from the poplar trees
Pastoral scene of the gallant south
The bulging eyes and the twisted mouth
The scent of magnolia sweet and fresh
Then the sudden smell of burning flesh
Here is a fruit for the crows to pluck
for the rain to gather
for the wind to suck
for the sun to rot
for the tree to drop
Here is a strange and bitter crop


Written by: Lewis Allan

Performed by: Billie Holiday (1939)

Album:  Strange Fruit
Record Company:  Commodore Records


"The Flowers" by Alice Walker
Reading and Writing about Short Fiction. Ed. Edward Proffitt. NY: Harcourt,
1988. 404-05.

It seemed to Myop as she skipped lightly from hen house to pigpen to smokehouse that the days had never been as beautiful as these. The air held a keenness that made her nose twitch. The harvesting of the corn and cotton, peanuts and squash, made each day a golden surprise that caused excited little tremors to run up her jaws.

Myop carried a short, knobby stick. She struck out at random at chickens she liked, and worked out the beat of a song on the fence around the pigpen. She felt light and good in the warm sun. She was ten, and nothing existed for her but her song, the stick clutched in her dark brown hand, and the tat-de-ta-ta-ta of accompaniment.

Turning her back on the rusty boards of her family's sharecropper cabin, Myop walked along the fence till it ran into the stream made by the spring. Around the spring, where the family got drinking water, silver ferns and wildflowers grew. Along the shallow banks pigs rooted. Myop watched the tiny white bubbles disrupt the thin black scale of soil and the water that silently rose and slid away down the stream.

She had explored the woods behind the house many times. Often, in late autumn, her mother took her to gather nuts among the fallen leaves. Today she made her own path, bouncing this way and that way, vaguely keeping an eye out for snakes. She found, in addition to various common but pretty ferns and leaves, an armful of strange blue flowers with velvety ridges and a sweet suds bush full of the brown, fragrant buds.

By twelve o'clock, her arms laden with sprigs of her findings, she was a mile or more from home. She had often been as far before, but the strangeness of the land made it not as pleasant as her usual haunts. It seemed gloomy in the little cove in which she found herself. The air was damp, the silence close and deep.

Myop began to circle back to the house, back to the peacefulness of the morning. It was then she stepped smack into his eyes. Her heel became lodged in the broken ridge between brow and nose, and she reached down quickly, unafraid, to free herself. It was only when she saw his naked grin that she gave a little yelp of surprise.

He had been a tall man. From feet to neck covered a long space. His head lay beside him. When she pushed back the leaves and layers of earth and debris Myop saw that he'd had large white teeth, all of them cracked or broken, long fingers, and very big bones. All his clothes had rotted away except some threads of blue denim from his overalls. The buckles of the overall had turned green.

Myop gazed around the spot with interest. Very near where she'd stepped into the head was a wild pink rose. As she picked it to add to her bundle she noticed a raised mound, a ring, around the rose's root. It was the rotted remains of a noose, a bit of shredding plowline, now blending benignly into the soil. Around an overhanging limb of a great spreading oak clung another piece. Frayed, rotted, bleached, and frazzled--barely there--but spinning restlessly in the breeze. Myop laid down her flowers.
And the summer was over.

November 15, 2013 - Continue Lesson from Thursday

See Thursday's lesson plan. Students were given extra time to revise their essay.

Teacher Model:

Richard Wright, the author or “Hunger,” uses tone and conflict to convey the theme of children entering adulthood at an age much younger than expected.  Wright changes the tone of how the mom talks to the narrator.  At first, the mom talks to the boy like a mother, like a mother talks to a child.  For example, the mother uses the word “Kungry” as a ploy to help her kid forgot how hungry he is.  But after the mother gets a job and the hunger only goes away a little bit, the mother’s tone changes from a mother talking to a child to a mother talking to a young adult (or even an adult).  For example, she says, “If you come back into the house without those groceries, I’ll whip you.”  The tone conveys the theme because how people talk to each other is determined by the age of the people involved in the conversation.  A mother would not talk to her eight year old boy in the manner in which the narrator’s mother talks to him.  The sweetness, the gentleness of the early conversation should remain, but by changing the tone, the author conveys that the child has moved in adulthood whether he is ready and of age or not.    

Thursday, November 14, 2013

November 14, 2013 - Analysis - How Literary Elements Drive Theme

I can gain a deeper meaning of "Hunger" through rereading and analysis.

To do this I must be able to identify literary elements such as figurative language, characterization, and conflict. 

I will demonstrate this by writing and discussing about the effect of literary elements on the message of the story.


Directions: After you finish your annotations of "Hunger" (finding literary elements: conflict, characterization, tone, metaphor, personification, and setting), write a two paragraph response about how two or more literary elements help drive/convey the theme of the story. 


November 13, 2013 - Continuing Deep Reading of "Hunger"

I can gain a deeper meaning of "Hunger" through rereading and analysis.

To do this I must be able to identify literary elements such as figurative language, characterization, and conflict. 

I will demonstrate this by writing and discussing about the effect of literary elements on the message of the story.


Directions: As you read, annotate for conflict, characterization, tone, metaphor, personification, and setting. Think about how these literary elements help drive the theme of the story.  Use the questions below to guide your thinking. 

HUNGER 2:
-          What does the dialogue in this section tell you about the narrator?  What is he like?
-          What does the dialogue in this section tell you about the mother?  What is she like?
-          At this point in the story, what is the relationship like between the mom and her son?
-          How does the dialogue in this section add to our understanding of the conflict?

HUNGER 3: 
-          Describe how the mother’s tone changes in this section.
-          Why do you think the mother’s tone changes in this section?
-          What internal conflict do you think the mother is dealing with in this section?
-          What internal conflict do you think the son is dealing with in this section?

HUNGER 4:
-          How has the narrator changed? 

-          What does the change in the narrator suggest about him?

Tuesday, November 12, 2013

November 12, 2013 - Deeper Meaning through Rereading and Analysis

I can gain a deeper meaning of "Hunger" through rereading and analysis.

To do this I must be able to identify literary elements such as figurative language, characterization, and conflict.

I will demonstrate this by writing and discussing about the effect of literary elements on the message of the story.

Directions: ONLY FOCUS ON CHUNK 1 - Questions below text. 


“Hunger” - excerpt from Black Boy by Richard Wright
Chunk 1 (Literary Devices)
           
Hunger stole upon me so slowly that at first I was not aware of what hunger really meant.  Hunger had always been more or less at my elbow when I played, but now I began to wake up at night to find hunger standing at my bedside, staring at me gauntly.  The hunger I had known before this had been no grim, hostile stranger; it had been a normal hunger that had made me beg constantly for bread, and when I ate a crust or two I was satisfied.  But this new hunger baffled me, scared me, made me angry and insistent.  Whenever I begged for food now, my mother would pour me a cup of tea, which would still the clamor in my stomach for a moment or two; but a little later I would feel hunger nudging my ribs, twisting my empty guts until they ached.  I would grow dizzy and my vision would dim.  I became less active in my play, and for the first time in my life I had to pause and think of what was happening to me.

Chunk 2 (Dialogue and Characterization)

“Mama, I’m hungry,” I complained one afternoon.
            “Jump up and catch a kungry,” she said, trying to make me laugh and forget.
            “What’s a kungry?”
            “It’s what little boys eat when they get hungry,” she said.
            “What does it taste like?”
            “I don’t know.”
            “Then why do you tell me to catch one?”
            “Because you said that you were hungry,” she said, smiling.  I sensed that she was teasing me and it made me angry.
            “But I’m hungry.  I want to eat.”
            “You’ll have to wait.”
            “But I want to eat now.”
            “But there’s nothing to eat,” she told me.
            “Why?”
            “Just because there’s none,” she explained.
            “But I want to eat,” I said, beginning to cry.
            “You’ll just have to wait,” she said again.
            “But why?”
            “For God to send some food.”
            “When is He going to send it?”
            “I don’t know.”
            “But I’m hungry!”
            She was ironing and she paused and looked at me with tears in her eyes.  “Where’s your father?”  she asked me.
            I stared in bewilderment.  Yes, it was true that my father had not come home to sleep for many days now and I could make as much noise as I wanted.  Though I had not known why he was absent, I had been glad that he was not there to shout his restrictions at me.  But it had never occurred to me that his absence would mean that there would be no food.
            “I don’t know,” I said.
            “Who brings food into the house?” my mother asked me.
            “Papa,” I said.  “He always brought food.”
            “Well your father isn’t here now,” she said.
            “Where is he?”
            “I don’t know,” she said.
            “But I’m hungry,” I whimpered, stomping my feet.
            “You’ll have to wait until I get a job and buy food,” she said.
           
Chunk 3 (Conflict and Characterization)

As the days slid past, the image of my father became associated with my pangs of hunger, and whenever I felt hunger, I thought of him with a deep biological bitterness.
            My mother finally went to work as a cook and left me and my brother alone in the apartment each day with a loaf of bread and a pot of tea.  When she returned at evening, she would be tired and dispirited and would cry a lot.  Sometimes, when she was in despair, she would call us to her and talk to us for hours, telling us that we now had no father, that our lives would be different from those of other children, that we must learn as soon as possible to take care of ourselves, to dress ourselves, to prepare our own food; that we must take upon ourselves the responsibility of the flat while she worked.  Half frightened, we would promise solemnly.  We did not understand what had happened between our father and our mother, and the most that these long talks did to us was to make us feel a vague dread.  Whenever we asked why father had left, she would tell us that we were too young to know.
            One evening my mother told me that thereafter I would have to do the shopping for food.  She took me to the corner store to show me the way.  I was proud; I felt like a grown-up.  The next afternoon I looped the basket over my arm and went down the pavement toward the store.  When I reached the corner, a gang of boys grabbed me, knocked me down, snatched the basket, took the money, and sent me running home in a panic.  That evening I told my mother what had happened, but she made no comment; she sat down at once, wrote another note, gave me more money, and sent me out to the grocery again.  I crept down the steps and saw the same gang of boys playing down the street.  I ran back into the house.
            “What’s the matter?” my mother asked.
            “It’s those same boys,” I said.  “They’ll beat me.”
            “You’ve got to get over that,” she said.  “Now go on.”
            “I’m scared,” I said.
            “Go on and don’t pay any attention to them,” she said.
            I went out the door and walked briskly down the sidewalk, praying that the gang would not molest me.  But when I came upon them, someone shouted.
            “There he is!”
            They came toward me and I broke into a wild run toward home.  They overtook me and flung me to the pavement. I yelled, pleaded, kicked, but they wrenched the money out of my hand.  They yanked me to my feet, gave me a few slaps, and sent me home sobbing.  My mother met me at the door.
            “They b-beat m-me,” I gasped.  “They t-t-took the m-money.”
            I started up the steps, seeking the shelter of the house.
            “Don’t you come in here,” my mother warned me.
            I froze in my tracks and stared at her.
            “But they’re coming after me,” I said.
            “You just stay right where you are,” she said in a deadly tone.  “I’m going to teach you this night to stand up and fight for yourself.”
            She went into the house and I waited, terrified, wondering what she talking about.  Presently she returned with more money and another note; she also had a long, heavy stick.
            “Take this money, this note, and this stick,” she said.  “Go to the store and buy those groceries.  If those boys bother you, then fight.”
            I was baffled.  My mother was telling me to fight, a thing that she had never done before.
            “But I’m scared,” I said.
            “Don’t you come into this house until you’ve gotten those groceries,” she said.
            “They’ll beat me, they’ll beat me,” I said.
            “Then stay in the streets; don’t come back here!”
            I ran up the steps and tried to force my way past her into the house.  A stinging slap came on my jaw.  I stood on the sidewalk, crying:
            “Please, let me wait until tomorrow,” I begged.
            “No,” she said.  “Go now!  If you come back into this house without those groceries, I’ll whip you!”
           
Chunk 4 (Elements of Plot)

She slammed the door and I heard the key turn in the lock.  I shook with fright.  I was alone upon the dark, hostile streets and gangs were after me.  I had the choice of being beaten at home or away from home.  I clutched the stick, crying, trying to reason.  If I were beaten at home, there was absolutely nothing I could do about it; but if I were beaten in the streets, I had a chance to fight and defend myself.  I walked slowly down the sidewalk, coming closer to the gang of boys, holding the stick tightly.  I was so full of fear that I could scarcely breathe.  I was almost upon them now.
            “There he is again!” the cry went up.
            They surrounded me quickly and began to grab for my hand.
           
Chunk 5 (Conclusion: Theme?)

“I’ll kill you!” I threatened.
            They closed in.  In blind fear I let the stick fly, feeling it crack against the boy’s skull.  I swung again, smashing another skull, then another.  Realizing that they would retaliate if I let up for but a second, I fought to lay them low, to knock them cold, to kill them so that they could not strike back at me.  I flayed with tears in my eyes, teeth clenched, stark fear making me throw every ounce of my strength behind each blow.  I hit again and again, dropping the money and the grocery list.  The boys scattered, yelling, nursing their heads, staring at me in utter disbelief.    They had never seen such frenzy.  I stood panting, egging them on, taunting them to come on and fight.  When they refused, I ran after them and they tore out for their homes, screaming.  The parents of the boys rushed into the streets and threatened me, and for the first time in my life I shouted at grown-ups, telling them that I would give them the same if they bothered me.  I finally found my grocery list and the money and went to the store.  On my way back I kept my stick poised for instant use, but there was not a single boy in sight.  That night I won the right to the streets of Memphis


HUNGER 1:
Answer the three following questions independently:

-         What is the major literary device used by Richard Wright in this paragraph?
-         Draw a picture that represents what you visualize in this paragraph.
-         Why does the author use this literary device in this paragraph?  What does it help us know about the conflict and the narrator?

J  Answer questions 1-5 in discussion form. Write the answer for 6 and 7 on a computer piece of paper.  

1.     What is the paragraph about?
2.     What are the narrators’ feelings about hunger?
3.     How is the hunger similar or different than your own hunger today? 
4.     How is this hunger different than his previous hungers?
5.     Why are the adjectives “grim” and “hostile” used to describe hungry?
6.     Quote
7.     The author uses ________ to convey (the author’s message)